【Career Development Centre of Student Affairs Office】 Further Study Insider (3): Avoid Common Errors and Perfect Your Personal Statement
【學生事務部 生涯發展中心】 升學情報(三):避免常見錯誤,寫出完美的個人陳述

Crafting an impactful personal statement that effectively highlights your strengths and maximizes your chances of admission requires careful attention to certain pitfalls. Here are the key mistakes to avoid:
Lack of Focus
Maintain a clear central theme aligned with your career goals and avoid covering too many unrelated experiences.
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Use specific and vivid language to express your experiences, motivations, and achievements, avoiding overused phrases.
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Back up your statements with concrete examples to showcase your accomplishments and skills.
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Organize your statement logically with a captivating introduction, key points, and a strong conclusion.
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Carefully proofread for spelling and grammar errors, seeking feedback from mentors or professors.
By avoiding these mistakes, you can create a compelling personal statement that highlights your uniqueness, leaving a lasting impression on admission officers and boosting your chances of admission.


打造一篇有說服力的個人陳述時,需要留意一些常見問題,才能有效地突出你的優勢,並會大大提高你被錄取的機會。以下是需要避免的關鍵錯誤:
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保持與你的職業目標一致的清晰主題,避免涵蓋過多無關的經歷。
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使用具體而生動的語言來描述你的經歷、動機和成就,避免過度使用短語。
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用具體的例子來支持你的陳述,展示你的成就和技能。
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通過引人入勝的引言、關鍵要點和有力的結尾,合理組織你的陳述。
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仔細校對拼寫和語法錯誤,尋求導師或教授的回饋。
通過避免這些錯誤,你可以打造一篇引人注目的個人陳述,突出你的獨特性,給招生官留下深刻印象,提高你被錄取的機會。

